Thursday, March 3, 2016

Assignment #5: Story Assignment

“The Cat and Mack”

The story begins in 1930s Chicago, a gray city with factories, apartment buildings, and dirty streets. Inside one of the factories, we see a man at work, welding piping with a mask over his face. He finishes his job, takes off his mask and wipes his forehead, then turns to a man standing behind him, who hands him a few dollars. The man walks away, and the worker, Mack, counts the few bills with a frown on his face. Finished working for the day, he walks home along the sidewalk, stopping at one point to look in a store window at a fancy display of gourmet cakes. Mack stops to looks at the food, licks his lips, but the turns away and walks dejectedly back down the street. He then waits in a breadline for a charity loaf of bread, then walks home with it under his arm, looking as miserable as he was before. He reaches his apartment and sets his things on the table, then looks through his cupboards, which are almost empty, for something to eat. Picking up a can of tuna and popping it open, he takes the tuna and bread outside to a fire escape beside his window. He eats his meal in silence, looking very depressed, when something draws his attention and he looks down to see a cat sitting beside him on the fire escape. The cat keeps staring at him, walking in circles and meowing for food, and even though he keeps it away at first, after a moment his expression softens and he hands the near empty can to the cat, who eats it happily. Mack heads back inside, and is soon followed by the cat. He tries to shoo it away, but it ignores him and curls up on his armchair and falls asleep. Looking confused and a little frazzled, Mack just shrugs and heads off to bed himself.

The next morning the cat wakes him up by walking all over him and begging for food again, and he very groggily gets up to start his day. We see bits and pieces of his day, the same as it was yesterday, with him working, getting paid meager wages, waiting for food and heading home, only this time when he arrives home, the cat is already there and is tearing holes into his armchair to make itself comfortable. Mack panics and shoos the cat off the chair and out the window, and then sits down to work on bills and job applications. He’s looking very stressed with his head in his hands, when suddenly a dead mouse is dropped beside him on the table, and he looks to see the cat sitting proudly, nudging the prize toward him as an offering. Mack gives the cat a very confused look, pokes at the mouse with his pen, then realizes what the cat is trying to do and reaches over the pet it. The cat is happy with the affection and comes closer to lie down on Mack’s paperwork, curling into a ball and falling asleep. Not quite knowing what else to do, Mack simply sighs and heads off to bed. The next morning he wakes up to the cat lying almost on his face, and finds that he overslept. He rushes off to work, and after doing his job and getting paid, prepares to leave. However, once he steps outside, he sees the cat waiting outside the factory. Confused, he begins to walk home, and the cat follows, though every time he stops to look back at it, the cat stops as well, cleaning itself and feigning innocence. They have fallen into a routine now, with Mack feeding the cat as they sit on the fire escape, Mack working on paperwork while the cat tries to lie on the papers (and Mack tries to move him), and Mack settling into bed, this time with the cat curled up next to him. Mack’s behavior starts to change, and he pets the cat lovingly, a small smile on his face for the first time.


The next morning however, the cat is nowhere to be seen. Mack is confused by this, but gets ready for the day and heads off to work. At work he’s distracted wondering about the cat, forgetting to count his money before he heads out and not stopping to look in the cake-shop window. Upon arriving home, he gets out the tuna as usual and eats on the fire escape, hoping to draw the cat back, but he never shows. As Mack goes about his evening of working on paperwork, he looks just as depressed as he was at the beginning, going through his work slowly and doing things that remind him of the cat, like setting aside a pile of papers for the cat to lie on and leaving extra room on the bed for the cat. The next day the cat still hasn’t shown up, and Mack starts to act differently. He applies for a new job, and on his way home from work, stops outside the cake shop, pulls out some change, and with a determined look goes in to buy a small piece of cake. Back home, eating his treat out on the fire escape, he looks a little more lively than he did before, having broken his routine and done something unexpected. He looks out over the city, still a little sad, and sighs before looking up at the stars. He smiles at the simple but beautiful sight, and suddenly is distracted by something sitting on the rail beside him. He looks to see that the cat has returned (and has started eating his cake), and he smiles widely as he picks up the cat, who rubs against him affectionately. Holding the cat in a little ball in his arms, they both look happily up at the stars.

1 comment:

  1. This story is really beautiful. It can be made into a short story or book. I think that is an issue though. It might be hard to get every aspect of your story into a short film of about 2 minutes. Also, you don't really say in the story of what kind of job he does have.

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